~Listening Lydia~
“And these voices,” said Dr. Sullivan, “do they tell you to do anything?”
“Even weirder,” said Lydia, twisting her tiny white hands together, the bones looking oddly like bird wings. “It’s all nonsense. Like scraps of conversations here and there. Things like, ‘guess that’s what you call a coop de grass.’”
Marcy Sullivan’s head snapped up. “What did you say? Don’t you mean ‘coup de grâce’?”
Lydia’s hands kept twisting. “No, that’s what I mean. It doesn’t even make sense. The voices in my head are as crazy as I am.”
Marcy looked down at her own hands this time. What was it her brother had said at dinner last night? That their mother had finally decided to have the henhouse torn down and planted with sod. “Guess that’s what you call a coop de grass,” he’d joked.
Were the voices in Marcy’s schizophrenic patient’s mind…Marcy’s voices?
This is a really original and interesting take! I never would have thought about that being able to happen, the voices of the therapist driving the patient crazy when they were far apart. How did you think of that? I'd love to read your book and find out how everything ties in together.
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Kathy M.
Sorry - too potentially mind-scary for me to read - but I'm sure it'll be a success with braver folk ...
ReplyDeleteI like this! This is a psychological drama with a definite twist, and your your description of her hands was very vivid.
ReplyDeleteWhat a creepy and tantalizing premise! I'd love to know where it goes. Do write this one.
ReplyDeleteWow, well done, Tammy, nothing at all like anyone else's, a really different take on the prompt. I like your author's name, too.
ReplyDelete—Kay, Alberta, Canada
Very cool plot line! It made me think of the movie "The Eyes of Laura Mars" with Faye Dunaway and Tommy Lee Jones. Creepy!
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh....this is terrific. Kinda chilling and yet humorous. It'll most definitely keep me turning the pages.
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ReplyDeleteThanks all! And thank you, Linda, for liking my dorky joke. Glad you're okay, Anni!
ReplyDeleteI find stories like this compelling. Multiple personality disorder is a fascinating subject.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like an entertaining mystery.'Voices' that joke.....original.
ReplyDeleteLOL, I loved the bird wing vision you planted too. :)
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