Thank
you to Grandma’s Goulash for hosting Succinctly Yours! The idea of this meme is
to use the photo as inspiration to simmer a story down to 140 words or 140
characters. The bonus word this week was “hesitate.”
Glenda didn’t hesitate to carry as her bouquet the broom switch she used to keep Enrique in line. 80
Enrique
didn’t hesitate to become entangled with Glenda and snag her as his bride.
They both felt compelled by something from above. 111
During
the elimination challenge of “Top Chef,” Glenda, knowing her position hung by
a thread, didn’t hesitate to use broom straw as her secret ingredient. She won.
138
I met an old lady
once, almost one hundred years old, and she told me, “There are only two
questions that human beings have ever fought over, all through history. How much do you love me? And Who’s in charge?” Everything else is
somehow manageable. But these two questions of love and control undo us all,
trip us up and cause war, grief and suffering. ~Eat Pray Love by Elizabeth Gilbert
Hari OM
ReplyDeleteHehehe, loved these - and yes it seems we caught a similar 'thread' &*> YAM xx
"Thread!" Love it!
ReplyDeleteTammy--
ReplyDeleteWith each of these super short stories, you prove you know how to craft them as you show us the ropes.
Instead of saying, "I do," perhaps Glenda and Enrique could say, " I, WOOD" ?
You left us hanging with the endings...
Good ones! Your comments just kept stringing me along.
DeleteHeh, heh. "...compelled by something from above." That's my favorite part.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Val!
DeleteI love the way Glenda is adept at using the broom as a multipurpose tool. lol You showed off your wordsmithing skills with the subtle nods to their marionette status without hitting us over the heads with it. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteLol...thanks so much, Lisa!
DeleteAll excellent, with a slight edge to story #3!
ReplyDeletePat
Critter Alley
Thank you, Pat!
DeleteA fine threesome. I'm still chuckling over the first. Glenda obviously knows the secret of a good marriage. lol
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